Dahlia, darling
You rushed to the
Waters edge
Looking for the
Hopping frogs
And shadowy creatures
That hold secrets
To the deep
Blue.
Slate rocks
And sharp coolness
Against your fingertips
As you noticed
Me
There I stood
Amongst the
River roses
Teaming with
Life and love.
Dahlia, darling
Will you notice
My ever bending
Gaze toward
The sun?
I was inspired by Sadje’s “What do you see” prompt! For this poem, I thought it would be fun to change the persective of the reader to be the flower. Normally, I would write about the beauty of the flower, but instead I wanted to mix up the narrative. I think it works pretty well, but then again it is hard to be a judge of your own work. What do you think? Did you like the change of perspective? Did you find it refreshing? Richard Kesperowski@ Unsplash
Great take on that image!
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Thanks so much! I had a lot of fun with this one, I loved your take on this image as well!
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Thanks 🙂 It was an inspiring photo!
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A clever change in stratevgy.
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Thanks for reading! I really like how this poem turned out. It’s been good to use these prompts as a way to mix up my writing and try new things!
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It is quite fun indeed🍁
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What a beautiful poem!
Loved it. 🙂
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Thank you! I am so glad it spoke to you!
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